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Sunday, 11 May 2014

Descriptive writing by Justin

The beach.

Descriptive writing


Using the Sensory details Smell,Hear,Taste,Touch, and using similes and metaphors.

Walt: Understand the structure of descriptive writing

At the beach, it has dusty sand that is on the ground and I can see the blue water that pounds into the shore and makes noises like a crash.              
When you taste the seawater it really taste like salt. When I touch the water it feels smooth and it just goes right through my fingers and the sand feels rough.

I can hear the birds making noise, I can hear the water pounding onto the shore and people talking whenever they play sandcastles and other stuff.
When I go into the water and when I go under the water it smells like salty water.
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                                         THE END :)

Mothers by Salote


Mother
When I See my mother she looks like the sweetest thing in the world. Everytime I Hear my mother calling, she sound like an angel. When my mother walks past me she smells like sweet yummy chocolate. My mother is an special lady and she is the coolest mum in the world.

Mother’s poem

A mother is a person, who will protect you and keep you safe. A mother is a person, who is there to wash your clothes, make you food to eat, keep you healthy and is always there. A mother is a person, who will take you to place’s you want to go, let you go when she ready. Right from my heart...It has three little words “I love you”.